This can be improved. However, for a first attempt at a game, this is very good.
What I liked: Sprites look really good, the pixelation of the characters add to the overall, shall I say, atmosphere of the game. Gives it a nice, simple feel without getting hard on my eyes. Almost a cartoony feel.
Room for improvement!: It is very hard to collect those Goth Bars. Try increasing the speed of the collectors OR increase the rate that the health bars drop OR increase the health bar OR decrease the field in where the Goth Bars fall. (I recommend the first and fourth options first though).
OVERALL: certainly not bad for a first attempt at this type, in fact, pretty good. Keep it up.
Extremely Challenging game. One thing: You should add difficulty.
Overall: Awesome 90% Score 4/5
thank you :)
The music is unique and is from me, like all things in this game.
You touched me in the heart !
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